you made mistakes with the camera angles and the side of the drive-through window/driver side seat.
also, work on the animation a little longer.
keep working at it!
Only thing is i feel it would love the touch of a final cut filter to the video file. something like a scan line filter and another for a contrast in tone for the solid colours. In my mind something like that would give it that extra dimension and really make this feel fuller!
awesome job regardless!
i really dont know what to say
Was there really point in saying anything then? I don't know, maybe fucking say why you gave 1 star, ya know? Actually go into detail about what you liked and didn't like about this. Explain how I can fix whatever mistakes were made, so that I can one day improve? Ya know, leave a fucking REVIEW?!
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